Writing task 1-Test 2
My answer:
The bar charts reveal the results of a poll which asked theatre goers to give their opinions on irritants during performances at the theatre.
The irritants can be divided into 2 main groups including sound and non-sound irritants with 12 irritating factors in total. For the former, ‘rustling sweet papers’ was chosen by the largest amount of asked people with 90%, bringing it to the top of the list. ‘Coughing’ and ‘whispering’ were supposed to be annoying by 75% and 60% of the respondents respectively. Half of the sample signified mobilephone as disturbing noise, which is followed closely by ‘sneezing’ which is given by 45%. Occupying 2 last positions are ‘bleeps’ and ‘snoring’ that irritated 40% and 30% of the participants.
The other group was not sound, comprising of five factors. Among those, ‘arriving late’ is the most selected irritant with ¾ of the sample specifying it as disturbance. By contrast, only ¼ of asked people was annoyed by ‘armrest hogging’, making it the least chosen disturbing factors among 12. The other two listed irritants in this group named ‘flash photography’ and ‘big hairdos’ being indicated by equal percentage of 25% which was slightly lower than ‘tall people’ being selected by 30%.
In a nutshell, the ultimate irritants for theatre goers during performances belong to sounds group.
Word count: 217
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My answer:
The bar charts reveal the results of a poll which asked theatre goers to give their opinions on irritants during performances at the theatre.
The irritants can be divided into 2 main groups including sound and non-sound irritants with 12 irritating factors in total. For the former, ‘rustling sweet papers’ was chosen by the largest amount of asked people with 90%, bringing it to the top of the list. ‘Coughing’ and ‘whispering’ were supposed to be annoying by 75% and 60% of the respondents respectively. Half of the sample signified mobilephone as disturbing noise, which is followed closely by ‘sneezing’ which is given by 45%. Occupying 2 last positions are ‘bleeps’ and ‘snoring’ that irritated 40% and 30% of the participants.
The other group was not sound, comprising of five factors. Among those, ‘arriving late’ is the most selected irritant with ¾ of the sample specifying it as disturbance. By contrast, only ¼ of asked people was annoyed by ‘armrest hogging’, making it the least chosen disturbing factors among 12. The other two listed irritants in this group named ‘flash photography’ and ‘big hairdos’ being indicated by equal percentage of 25% which was slightly lower than ‘tall people’ being selected by 30%.
In a nutshell, the ultimate irritants for theatre goers during performances belong to sounds group.
Word count: 217
Give me some comments, pls. Thousands of thanks !!!